My "Practice" Narrative Writing

I am learning to practice on how I could use FIgurative Language, and other writing prompts I could include in my Writing.

So earlier today we had the opportunity to have a "Practice Writing Test", Every single person in Room 10, was given the same Image to write about..

The Writing Image 

(Every picture tells a story)

My Story:

Late at night, before midnight strikes... a young child walks along the “Forest Full of Mysteries”! The young female, was taken and known by the name of.. “Katlyn”. She wears a red cloak, and enters carrying a basket.. As she walks further and further she is seeking a special “bush”. The bush she is looking for, will help her to heal her mother from the sickness she has! Then “DOOM, DOOM, DOOM” Midnight, hits and as she walks MILLIONS, of thought run through her head! She then begins to think to herself, “I feel as if the trees follow my every step”, but she just believed it was her imagination.. And carried on moving. All of a sudden, she turns back in a shock and she find, the trees long vines begin to undo themselves, and sway towards her side by side… She breaths in and out, and tries to calm herself slowly. Later that morning, she passed along a strange place in the forest. It was circled, around them with burnt, leaves, branches, and vines. When “Katlyn” realised it was a circle, she thought it was strange but didn’t assume anything.. After a while it was approximately, 12.58AM and she was still looking for the “bush”... Then 3,2,1 BOOM.. Lightning strikes, Thunder Hits, and the Trees swaying side by side, sound as if they are whistling.. She is speechless, shocked, and all of those INTIMIDATING emotion are running through her body! She then released her torch from the basket she had been carrying, and looked around herself.. BOOM she realises a whole bunch of “WILD WOLVES” surround her, and she takes 2-3 seconds to breath, and then she thinks RUN!!!!!!! The wolves chased but though she ran before them her speed, was no match for them.. She then surrendered and stood there. The wolves walked closer and closer, and still she was shaking.. The wolves were covered in blood.. “Bloody Blood Bursting Brightly”. They then attacked at once, but luckily a helicopter was on the look for her. Her “mother” was afraid something may of happened to her while she was looking for the “bush” to heal her.. So she called Emergency Services, and they realised her “BRIGHT RED CLOAK”..! They let down a ladder and as she reached for it, they pulled her up slowly.. But one of the “WILD WOLVES” were ready to attack.. They caught her Cloak, and she they had no choice but to undo her cloak.. And so she did, she was up and safe but injured badly.. She was bleeding from leg, and stomach! They flew her to nearest hospital available and she was treated with medicine to heal her..! Once she was discharged, and released.. She went home and found that her mother sadly died! “Dangerous Days Dreadfully Dyed Deeply”, She cried and cried but she knew her tears wouldn’t bring her back to life..!! They had a funeral for her, and she laid there and was buried peacefully! 10 years after her mother died, she was living with her family (Husband and 3 kids).. As they drove by the forest “Full Of Mysteries” it was OFF LIMITS!! She helped them realise that it would be more helpful to help others realise their are boundaries for their children, and also themselves! She felt as if she did the world a favour, and saved many more lives from dieing!

I hope my story was able to hook my audience in, and want you to keep reading!

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